it's hard for me to to criticise, i'm not sure if i find the right words and don't want to hurt someone.
in this layout i miss some texture and the blue is too much for my taste (i love blue) the whole layout is a bit too dark, no impression of any happy atmosphere.
there are no highlights in there.
i hope i could help
Das Licht am Ende des Tunnels kann auch ein Idiot mit einer Laterne sein
The light at the end of the tunnel, can also be an idiot with a lantern