Title Font critique please

[Joba2]

Something is wrong with the font. Is it the size and or color ?
I thought it would be a cute whimsical font to use for a valentine LO but maybe it isn't the right font to use at all?

Jessa's Purpie

[nighty]

hmmm, for my taste, the pink doesn't match the other colors
and somehow the font itself doesn't look right.
i think i would try another font

[JCSimon]

I think it's the font itself. There's already so much texture w/the paper and elements, I think a solid, simpler font would look better. JMO

[Lori11941]

I both Jamie and Nighty, I don't really like the font for the journaling and I don't think the purple font goes well. If you want a lovey type font, try Fiolex Girls or MC Sweetie Hearts. They're solid with little hearts in it. And I'd make both parts of the journaling black. I think the font you used would be better suited for a title, something short and done in a large print.

[Joba2]

Thanks a bunches. I just knew it was wrong. I am first getting into fonts and I downloaded this one and had to try it.I didn't like it right away for this layout. I used pink to match purpie thinking of Candee's tut ...crap.But i knew it was n't right either. I will take your excellent advise and redo the layout.

[~Heather~]

I think the font is fine actually, I think its the colors.

So what I would do since you have that purple and you want to use the reds, is I would

1.use white for background
2.recolor a small paper bit with the bear color
3.add some doodles with the red and purple from the bear and black on the background white sheet

Or you could use a black background and reverese the black doodles to white doodles.

[Joba2]

Oh I got to try that.Sounds like it would make a great LO to show off purpie alot better..Thanks for the critique