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JanW.
Super SAS-y Moderator
Registered: July 2007 Location: WV Posts: 1,201
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Mon September 15, 2008 08:29
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Judge: I agree about the center clock. My comment was referring to the clock on your camp logo, as if you clipped the photo to the mat the clock would not have fit. Perhaps you could put the center clock back and omit (or change) the one on the logo. Just thinking out loud 
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AJR65
theStudio CT
Registered: August 2007 Location: Nieuwegein Posts: 1,957
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Mon September 15, 2008 11:04
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Judge:
If you like the clock in the center put it back, perhaps make it more noticable bij changing the paper beneat it or the color of the clock.
I still not happy with the placement of the top pictures.
In this weeks tutorial there is a part about alignment, that might explain what I mean. I think those pictures should be similar in form
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DarleneH
theStudio Monet
Registered: October 2007 Location: California Posts: 3,985
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Mon September 15, 2008 11:11
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JUDGE - I'm seeing this layout without viewing the other one first, so I can't address the changes here but my comments are... I do like the clock repeated near the middle. It's a nice subtle touch. I also like the sepia-toned photo contrasting the colored one. I think the leaves are on the paper, right? And they look good under the title (great font for this layout, too.). Good job!
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nnorcutt
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: July 2007 Location: Minnesota Posts: 543
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Mon September 15, 2008 12:43
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JUDGE- I have not seen the first layout either, but I like this one. The one thing I noticed though was that the frame with the logo goes right to the edge of the page. It really drew my eye there, in fact that was the first thing I saw on your page. I'll have to go back & look at your previous version to see how you had that logo the first time & then I'll come back with a suggestion.
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Jiskefet
theStudio Warhol
Registered: April 2008 Location: the Netherlands Posts: 918
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Mon September 15, 2008 12:59
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Actually, I preferred the first version, though I would like to see the camp logo fitted in the lining, the same way the top photo of the horse is. The way it is placed now, a solid square right in the top left corner, is a dissonant.
And a little linguistic correction: it is 'time flies', not 'time flys'......
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CanDesigns
SAS-y Diamond
Registered: August 2007 Posts: 2,054
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mom2triplets04
theStudio Artist
Registered: June 2008 Posts: 231
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Wed September 17, 2008 10:36
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Great photos. Love the colors.
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