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tiza126
SAS-y Gem
Registered: February 2008
Location: Missouri
Posts: 380
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Sun September 7, 2008 11:24
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I like how you associated the Feelin Welcome kit with the historial reference to Lady Libery welcoming immigrants to America. Very thoughtful! I also like how you have the pictures peeking out from the border. The shadows seem a little heavy though.
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CanDesigns
SAS-y Diamond
Registered: August 2007
Posts: 2,054
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Sun September 7, 2008 11:53
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JUDGE - I love how you put this together - your photo placement and size are perfect. I would lighten up your shadows quite a bit though and make the ones on the photos much smaller. The leaf one is the right size, but lighter would look more realistic I think. Other than those minor changes, it's a gorgeous layout.
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Joba2
theStudio Picasso
Registered: August 2007
Posts: 1,956
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Sun September 7, 2008 13:28
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I love how you tucked the photos in the torn paper border
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mom2triplets04
theStudio Artist
Registered: June 2008
Posts: 231
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Sun September 7, 2008 14:43
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Great placement and photos.
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nnorcutt
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: July 2007
Location: Minnesota
Posts: 543
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Sun September 7, 2008 14:47
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JUDGE- I also love the layout of the page, but the shadows are much too dark. The shadow on the torn border needs to come down farther on the page. See at the bottom the shadow doesn't go all the way to the bottom of the page. You're off to a great start!
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DarleneH
theStudio Monet
Registered: October 2007
Location: California
Posts: 3,985
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Sun September 7, 2008 15:11
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I agree about the shadows being too heavy, especiall on the "paper" elements (which includes the photos). If you put the shadows on their own layers, one way to handle this is to lower the opacity. Nnorcutt is correct, too, about the shadow on the torn paper not reaching the bottom - very observant and I almost missed it, sheesh!
The composition is lovely and I like this LO a lot - I'm a sucker for torn paper!
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Stash Empress
theStudio Artist
Registered: October 2007
Posts: 177
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Sun September 7, 2008 15:58
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You guys are all gonna laugh when I tell you that I did this LO (and all my digital scrapbooking to date) in Print Shop... the dropped shadows were default... these were the smallest... I can make them less opaque or more or less diffuse.. but... not.. *smaller* LOL! I guess I can fiddle the opaque/diffuse settings & see if I get anything that looks better... As for the shadow on the torn strip not reaching the bottom.. I'm scratching my head over that one--- I used the exact same default shadow for all the elements... including the angle -- unless the program set the shadow for the angle the element was *originally* (which was horizontal) instead of the angle it is now? Then I'll have to fiddle the angle on that to get it to match in its current position.... Gosh..... playing with the "big kids"... :-)
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Amberpony
theStudio Monet
Registered: April 2008
Location: Nevada City, CA Winter 2011
Posts: 4,585
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Sun September 7, 2008 18:51
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You Page would make a Great Template!
Nice Job! I remember Print Shop, Boy would you take our Breath Away if you had PSE6.
Very Impressed with your work!
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rags2r
theStudio CT
Registered: July 2007
Posts: 322
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Sun September 7, 2008 19:45
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Judge- Wonderful layout and great photos. I have to agree with the others though about the shadows. I don't know how to tell you to fix it though as I am not familiar with Print Shop. But I looked online to see if they have any kind of instruction manual. I don't know what version you have but according to what I read there is a manual within the program. Look at this link : http://www.bellaonline.com/articles/art6373.asp . I hope this helps.
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AJR65
theStudio CT
Registered: August 2007
Location: Nieuwegein
Posts: 1,963
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Sun September 7, 2008 22:17
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Judge: Great placement, but the dropshadows om the pictures are a little to big, specialy on the picture of the statue. Just play with them to see what looks right
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cass
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: August 2007
Location: Australia
Posts: 915
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Sun September 7, 2008 22:57
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Great shadow with the torn edge.
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Joba2
theStudio Picasso
Registered: August 2007
Posts: 1,956
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Mon September 8, 2008 02:13
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I didn't know you could make LO's with print shop. All I ever did with it is make cards & newsletters.You are a very clever lady.
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Mamrotka
SAS-y Lady
Registered: March 2008
Location: Cracow, Poland
Posts: 1,376
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Mon September 8, 2008 06:02
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JUDGE:
I love the layout of the page, but the shadows are much too dark and too big.
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tessthescrapper
theStudio Artist
Registered: June 2008
Location: Colorado
Posts: 136
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Mon September 8, 2008 10:04
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I hope you have great luck with your program fixing the shadows! I love the LO.
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Tell your children of it, and let your children tell their children, and their children another generation. - Joel 1:3
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Pacifika
theStudio Monet
Registered: January 2008
Location: Spokane, WA
Posts: 2,790
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Mon September 29, 2008 08:25
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Love your association between Lady Liberty and the Feelin' Welcome kit. Great thinking. Terrific pics and pretty page.
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