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nnorcutt
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: July 2007
Location: Minnesota
Posts: 543
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Sun September 7, 2008 15:13
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JUDGE- You did a really good job on this layout. I noticed you even credited the fonts you used. A+ for that, I'm a font collector & love to know the names of the ones I see in layouts. One little thing I'd change though. The shadows on the little boxes to the right of the photo look "off". They should be going down, not up like they are now. Otherwise awesome!
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DarleneH
theStudio Monet
Registered: October 2007
Location: California
Posts: 3,985
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Sun September 7, 2008 15:30
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JUDGE - I'm so sorry to hear about the cancer - my prayers will be with your family. I love the photo, too precious.
I agree with everything nnorcutt said so the only thing I'll add is, I would but a shadow behind the title too. It gets a bit lost with the patterned background. I would keep the shadows on any lettering subtle, but just enough to make it pop off the page a bit.
Beautiful LO and composition!
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CanDesigns
SAS-y Diamond
Registered: August 2007
Posts: 2,054
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Sun September 7, 2008 15:48
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JUDGE - I agree with both Nnorcutt and Darlene, other than those little changes I say you're good to go. It's a beautiful, touching layout and I love that it's written from the child's point of view. Big hugs to GG.
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cass
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: August 2007
Location: Australia
Posts: 915
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Sun September 7, 2008 22:57
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Lovely journal and a cute pic.
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tessthescrapper
theStudio Artist
Registered: June 2008
Location: Colorado
Posts: 136
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Mon September 8, 2008 10:13
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I don't know what program you are using but I think I would use the styles if you have ps or pse to put a little bit of pizazz to your title.
Otherwise the LO looks great.
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Tell your children of it, and let your children tell their children, and their children another generation. - Joel 1:3
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AneczkaW
theStudio Picasso
Registered: November 2007
Location: Poland
Posts: 1,656
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Mon September 8, 2008 10:53
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JUDGE: Beautiful journaling , so honest and touching. It really looks great. I would like to only change the colors of the title , I would choose some brighter one , because like Darlene said the title gets a bit lost with the patterned background.
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franbvm
theStudio Warhol
Registered: July 2007
Posts: 812
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Wed September 10, 2008 11:20
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Heartfelt journaling! Great photo and LO.
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Pacifika
theStudio Monet
Registered: January 2008
Location: Spokane, WA
Posts: 2,790
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Mon September 29, 2008 08:25
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Really nicely done. Great to have journaling. I really like the way you split the page. Nice job.
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