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DarleneH
theStudio Monet
Registered: October 2007 Location: California Posts: 3,985
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Mon September 8, 2008 15:04
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JUDGE - The shadows here are much better and the additional white on the font helps make is more distinctive. 
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CanDesigns
SAS-y Diamond
Registered: August 2007 Posts: 2,054
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Mon September 8, 2008 16:22
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JUDGE - The bottom tear looks great now, as does the title. But I've noticed you've added an "up" shadow now on your photo, yet above it you have a drop shadow. Remove that and you have a perfect layout.
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Cindyrelly
theStudio Artist
Registered: February 2008 Location: Central Florida USA Posts: 412
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Mon September 8, 2008 16:43
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What a great idea using the torn border across the top and bottom like that Nice photo too! GG looks very happy that day 
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AJR65
theStudio CT
Registered: August 2007 Location: Nieuwegein Posts: 1,965
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Mon September 8, 2008 22:46
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Judge: Great improvement and I agree with CanDesigns the shadow on the picture is of. Just remove it or make it the same direction as the other shadows
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kittenb
SAS-y Gem
Registered: July 2007 Posts: 286
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Wed September 10, 2008 21:20
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Judge - Great rework. I do agree about the importance of shadowing being the same direction.
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lyndagilles
SAS-y Pebble
Registered: February 2008 Posts: 78
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Thu September 11, 2008 06:18
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nice lo great journalling
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kimberkatt
theStudio Party Girl
Registered: August 2007 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 9,108
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Thu September 11, 2008 07:20
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Beautiful, heartfelt layout! Prayers are with GG!
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