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cass
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: August 2007
Location: Australia
Posts: 915
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Wed September 17, 2008 00:20
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Great page.
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Jiskefet
theStudio Warhol
Registered: April 2008
Location: the Netherlands
Posts: 918
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Wed September 17, 2008 04:26
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Judge - I really don't know what to say about this, it is fabulous. A tad more drop shadow on the triple frame, maybe, but that is the only possible improvement I can see....
Love the extraction, too
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digimomdesigns
SAS-y Opal
Registered: April 2008
Location: New York State
Posts: 1,134
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Wed September 17, 2008 05:21
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Judge - Beautiful job on this...I don't see anything that really needs changing either...if I HAD to find something, I might say to adjust the ribbon on the triple frame, at the top there is space between it and the page top, and at the bottom it goes off the page. So either have it go off at the top, or bring the bottom up a little. But that's a total nitpicky thing because there is nothing else to say. LOL Beautiful LO! You do need the kit and designer name in the keywords though. 
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JanW.
Super SAS-y Moderator
Registered: July 2007
Location: WV
Posts: 1,201
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Wed September 17, 2008 06:02
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Judge: I agree that the shadow could be a bit bigger on the triple frame and the ribbon should extend to the top of the page. Fixing the keywords is a must. The layout is wonderful! Great job on the extraction.
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CanDesigns
SAS-y Diamond
Registered: August 2007
Posts: 2,054
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Wed September 17, 2008 06:35
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JUDGE - this is just FABULOUS, and thanks for using one of my kits!! I love your composition - as you say it adds tremendous interest to the layout. I did notice however that your drop shadows are all in different directions on your text. Check into that, and like the other judges said add a bit larger but softer ds to your other elements. And the keywords of course. But this is a super layout.
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AJR65
theStudio CT
Registered: August 2007
Location: Nieuwegein
Posts: 1,963
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Wed September 17, 2008 08:03
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Judge: Great LO. I think you caught the action.
I agree with the judges about the dropshadows, and while you're at it try is a little shadow on your extration that might give it an extra pop.
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mom2triplets04
theStudio Artist
Registered: June 2008
Posts: 231
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Wed September 17, 2008 10:09
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Great photos. Great job on your extraction. Great colors.
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nnorcutt
SAS-y Pearl
Registered: July 2007
Location: Minnesota
Posts: 543
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Wed September 17, 2008 11:47
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JUDGE- Yep, what they said. :p Great job on this layout.
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mmcard
SAS-y Pebble
Registered: August 2008
Posts: 86
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Wed September 17, 2008 12:38
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Great layout, love the composition and the elements!
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darlingina
theStudio Monet
Registered: August 2007
Location: Central Oklahoma
Posts: 2,289
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Wed September 17, 2008 12:56
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Great photos and you made such a fun layout with Candee's kit!
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